Not bad considering it's your first animation.
You need to work on your art style, its kind of basic at the moment. I'd also recommend changing the auido quality next time, it's annoying having low quality music. Maybe add some effects like rain or something, I want to see improvements.
It's good cos it has me topless in it.
Gameplay is pants though, more pictures of me = good game :)
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